DISCLAIMER: I have the third edition so my poems may not
be the same as some of you guys’. Here’s a link to the poem I’m analyzing: http://www.wussu.com/poems/plam.htm
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“Annus Mirabilis” (I discovered after a quick Google search)
means “a remarkable year”, which is exactly what Phillip Larkin describes in
his poem of the same name. In it he depicts his sexual awakening in the year of
1963 in such few words, but the reader is still able to feel the joy, shame,
and relief that Larkin experienced at this time in his life. The first stanza
reads, “Sexual intercourse began/ In nineteen sixty-three / (Which was rather
late for me)- / Between the end of the Chatterly
ban / And the Beatles’ first LP.” (1-6) Already, we have an idea not only of
what the author’s life was like, but also what time the poem takes place. These
few lines, with their bouncy, lilting end rhymes, set an exact period of time
and how late the author’s sexual awakening was in his life (with further
research on Larkin, I found he was forty-one in 1963). This lighthearted rhythm
carries throughout the poem, as the next stanza reads, “Up till then there’d
only been / a sort of bargaining, / A wrangle for a ring, / A shame that
started at sixteen / And spread to everything.” (7-11) Once again, though
dealing with a heavy topic; his struggle with his sexuality; Larkin’s cheery
voice makes it read like a children’s book. The light end rhymes show that even
though this was clearly a dark time in his life, he is past it, and that this
poem now serves as a reflection on something he should not be ashamed of. He proceeds,
“Then all at once the quarrel sank: / Everyone felt the same, / And every life
became / A brilliant breaking of the bank, / A quite unlosable game.” (12-15)
Here Larkin’s voice practically makes the relief tangible for his audience, not
only with his rhyme, but with his word choice as well. Words like “sank”, “brilliant”,
and “unlosable” effectively paint a picture of just how magnificent it was for
him, and many others, to experience such a sexual awakening and shed whatever shame
they had felt before. Larkin then uses repetition by reciting the first stanza
again at the close of the poem. This serves as a truly brilliant way of showing
just how remarkable his annus mirabilis
was, and how it ended preceding years of shame in a most beautiful way.
One of the points that I agree here is that the rhyming adds a sort of lightness to the poem. The topic itself isn't all that serious so it makes sense to have a lot end rhyme in the poem. The lightness also adds to the fact that when you're a young teenager nothing really matters and you just do what you want without thinking.
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