The cold directness of Sylvia Plath’s opening line of "Stillborn" is unaffectionate and distant, though the rest of the poem is very emotional and sympathetic. "These poems do not live: it is a sad diagnosis," uniquely introduces the poem’s theme of death, particularly inexplicable infant death. Plath opens her emotional questioning of why some mothers must endure the labor of a perfectly healthy infant only to have the child born deceased rather bluntly. Though she goes on to exclaim "O I cannot explain what happened to them!" and fills the rest of her poem with more lines harping on the senseless tragedy of stillbirths, her poem concludes just as coldly as it begins: "And they stupidly stare and do not speak at her." Plath’s poem is actually very similar to the short life of a stillborn baby. She describes how a baby develops perfectly healthy in the womb, and then the poem abruptly ends with an image of a lifeless infant. The conclusion also conjures the same feelings of unexpected and irreversible loss that a mother of a stillborn baby would feel. I also find the line "And they smile and smile and smile and smile at me" very interesting as well. The phrase "smile and smile" is almost cliché, but Plath’s addition of a second "smile and smile" makes the smiles seem haunting and never ending; I can feel the emptiness of a deceased infant’s expressionless face by the end of this line. Plath’s poem effectively elicits empty, confused emotions.
Augusta, one thing I will say about this poem first is that it is highly depressing. Secondly, your analysis of the breakdown of the way the author wrote the piece was very good and detailed. The connection between the loss of a stillborn child to a mother and the irreversible loss that the author so deeply and somberly described in the poem is so vivid and heart breaking it just made me feel as if I was going to tear up while reading it.
ReplyDeleteI especially like the way that you emphasize this unexpectedly confused tone in your analysis of this poem. The speaker presents shockingly disgusting images of stillborn birth that sharply contrast the feelings about stillborns that readers most likely hold. This unsettling approach to describing stillborn birth connects readers to the confusion a poet feels at the sudden meaninglessness that is a failed poem.
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