There are several effective writing techniques to shape and develop a
fictional character in a way which is natural and contributes to the plot of
the story rather than being an end in itself. First of all the use of authentic
dialogue can give a lot of depth to a character. Joyce Carol Oates' short story
Where Are You Going, Where Have You Been
is a good example for that. More than three quarters of the story consist of
dialogue between Connie and Arnold and although a lot of characterization of
Connie is given on the previous two pages already, this dialogue reveals her
true self with all its contradictions and individualities which ultimately lead
to the tragic ending. The character of Arnold Friend stays shady, but his
impalpable and symbolic being is developed even more throughout the dialogue
("I know everybody", "Aunt Tillie's. Right now they're uh—they're drinking. Sitting
around"). Sometimes dialogue can be superfluous and without connection to
the story at first glance, but crucial to a character and its motivations on
closer examination. And what is crucial to the character is ultimately crucial
to conflict and story itself. Although not from literature, I think the
dialogue in most movies by Quentin Tarantino is a good example for this.
Even more
important for the development of character and conflict in a story is the use
of sufficient relatable detail. Amy Bloom's short story Silver Water gathers a lot of its emotional strength by stressing
that every family can get into the same situation as Rose's. It is important
that the mother "bangs out 'Gimme a Pigfoot'" and "Schubert's
'Schlummerlied'" to give the reader the impression that all of the
characters could basically live next door. Drama and tragedy must never be
abstract, its protagonists have to be relatable. Rose only becomes the human
being she is because we get to know about her incredible singing talents as
well as the "extra-extra-large Celtics sweatpants". It is easy to
sketch a mentally ill through the thousandth generalization - what makes a story
and its characters human and touching is detail.
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